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Tuesday 20 November 2018

Keyhole Narrative



In my story there were five brothers they liked to protect each other and play with each other. The first was Kitione he was one of the big hitters in world he loved to hits people. The second brothers name was John he was known as the fastest person in the world. The third brothers name was willie he was mean at stepping people from other teams and the last brothers name was moui he was strong and he called knock people out with one punch on the mouth.After two days there was a bunch of enemy's rushing up into us.The first person came and the big hitter Kitione hits the first person and he went flying into the air man then the rest of them came up and everyone went up and they all got and hiding. Because the hitter was giving them a hiding and the puncher man he got the meanest hiding then the zoom zoom guy came past and boom into the face but man those enemies got the meanest hiding far man if zoom zoom guy John didn't come far they could've got a hiding by those enemies. But just when that king came in far man they quickly said sorry to each other then that when they stopped fighting each other but they hanged out every everyday.












As all months came by they lived happily ever after but just remember when you need help all the heros.Man but I can't stop thinking about how they got the meanest hiding. But when they got a hiding they were gone by one punch they were one of the worse fighters I ever versed.THE BEST THE COOLEST THE HERO'S yeah ooooooooo.
















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